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2023-11-02 16:10:32

I understand and respect the proposal, but this has no animation, it is just an slideshow. Even if it's an tribute, you gotta put effort to your entry!
Also, is "wowwowwubbzy2008" your actual TikTok account?
I'll give you mid star for the proposal, on the rest, please improve.

Oversimplified responds:

Bro I understand I didn't put much effort in it but I was 12 when I made that video how do you expect a 12 year old to make better stuff

Green Impostors Revenge

2023-08-15 20:26:53

What is this?
This is an animation- With no sounds. There's no sound effects instead of some screams. The animation looks bad and the combat seem ridiculous. The story is also confusing. The green crewmate avenges the Red death and then tries to kill the black crewmate which ends killing Green but Green wakes up like nothing then Green falls like he's dead again and randomly appears on another site where is the pink crewmate and black kills pink because yes but green was on his back and he stabs him then they jump to the ship where Black takes some kind of... Yellow laser sword? From his eyes? And then they appear on ANOTHER site where Green finally kills Black only to find Red was alive all the time. What an bad plot twist. Why is everyone resurrecting? Why? And why are the backgrounds pixelated? Why did green became so mad at black? Did black killed red?
None of the sprites are real. They're just photos of Among us crewmates simulating fights which looks ridiculous. Why do they randomly appear on sites instead of going up?
The best rating I can give this is an 0. Everything is wrong here. If you're starting to do movies like this use sticks because they're easy to animate. By the thumbnail I can tell this was made on scratch as it uses the Retro scratch font. Please even with scratch you can do something better like this. This looks like an school project
Also, if Red is alive, why is there going to be an part 2? What will it be about?

Edit: Okay. Perhaps I've been to harsh with you. There's no actual problem with the Retro font, I just said I realized it was an Scratch project by that, I'm actually an big fan of retro stuff, but how didn't Green died if Black literally impaled him and he was bleeding? But why will there no be an second part if the thumbnail actually advertises it as an first chapter and even gives it a name? And ok, I get the sites part. But still, even try to handle criticism next time, you even added the desc saying no negative reviews. Have an nice day

OrangeStickFigure responds:

Right, sorry im trying to share my project with the world, I just wanted people to see, and whats wrong with the normal font? Think what you want and mostly what you said isnt true, like green doesnt keep dying, there will be no part 2 and yes, black killed red.

The sites randomly appear because these were different projects on scratch, I just put them together. Black punches green through a window and thats why they land on the platform. Im sorry it isnt clear, I will add more sounds. In fact, im doing it already.

A rating of 0 is harsh for someone who tried and did nothing to you. So next time, be a bit nicer.
You dont need to reply, and if you do, dont just make a whole argument saying Im wrong.

I tried my best and understood you didnt like it (in fact you hated it) for a reason I dont know why, Im just a child trying to share their projects, so please, mind your own business.

Also it doesnt help, my first comment I get is pure hate. Doesnt help at all, and thanks for the advice, I might not make stickman animations put I'll keep it in mind.

Goodbye.

Edit: I forgive you, and Green didn't die because he gained powers because he ate a special fruit (sounds cringe and it is cringe) the first chapter thingy was because I already had that thumbnail, and I have an idea now to make a second part. I don't usually do well with criticism but I'll try handle some next time. Cya.